Writing Task 1: The Basics
Step 4: Rewrite the story from Step 3, but add ADJECTIVES & ADVERBS to make the story more interesting. Have fun with the adjectives and adverbs. Be creative!
(See p 10-13 in the BASICs Handout.)
Title:
The person is called Abdullah, and he's from Saudi Arabia. He lives in a beautiful city in eastern part of Saudi Arabia that is called Alkhobar. He's in the mid 20's, even though he hasn't gone to college, yet. He loves his family, and they love him as well. Since he wanted to learn new language, he went immediately to U.S. to learn English. He got married as soon as he finished studying in U.S. 10 years later, he had 3 incredible children. He got hired to a good position in his work place before he bought a new nice house to live in for the rest of his life. By the time he got his Master's degree with high degree, his first son got married. Ten years after he got married, he had a child. After a deep thinking, he named his child Borat. Borat decided to achieve his dream which was being an artist because he did not enjoy his postion in his dad's company. He decided to go to Paris, so he can start his artistic career. When Borat wanted to be a famous artist where he can show people his work, he devoted all his time and effort to reach that hard goal. After four years of hard work, Borat decided to go back to his hometown, Alkhobar to see his family, so he called his father and informed him that he will be back home soon. Abdullah rushed happily to the airport to pickup his son, however Borat arrived to Alkhobar holding two beautiful young girls. They were his daughters Faswa and Fsyah, but Abdullah was in shock because he knew nothing about his granddaughters. Borat told his father all about his amazing life in Paris while Abdullah was in tears and speechless. Abdullah welcomed his new granddaughters, and he told welcome back. From the day Abdullah saw his granddaughters, and he never got apart from his angels as he calls them. They all lived a happily ever after it was like a fairy tale.
Step 4: Rewrite the story from Step 3, but add ADJECTIVES & ADVERBS to make the story more interesting. Have fun with the adjectives and adverbs. Be creative!
(See p 10-13 in the BASICs Handout.)
Title:
The person is called Abdullah, and he's from Saudi Arabia. He lives in a beautiful city in eastern part of Saudi Arabia that is called Alkhobar. He's in the mid 20's, even though he hasn't gone to college, yet. He loves his family, and they love him as well. Since he wanted to learn new language, he went immediately to U.S. to learn English. He got married as soon as he finished studying in U.S. 10 years later, he had 3 incredible children. He got hired to a good position in his work place before he bought a new nice house to live in for the rest of his life. By the time he got his Master's degree with high degree, his first son got married. Ten years after he got married, he had a child. After a deep thinking, he named his child Borat. Borat decided to achieve his dream which was being an artist because he did not enjoy his postion in his dad's company. He decided to go to Paris, so he can start his artistic career. When Borat wanted to be a famous artist where he can show people his work, he devoted all his time and effort to reach that hard goal. After four years of hard work, Borat decided to go back to his hometown, Alkhobar to see his family, so he called his father and informed him that he will be back home soon. Abdullah rushed happily to the airport to pickup his son, however Borat arrived to Alkhobar holding two beautiful young girls. They were his daughters Faswa and Fsyah, but Abdullah was in shock because he knew nothing about his granddaughters. Borat told his father all about his amazing life in Paris while Abdullah was in tears and speechless. Abdullah welcomed his new granddaughters, and he told welcome back. From the day Abdullah saw his granddaughters, and he never got apart from his angels as he calls them. They all lived a happily ever after it was like a fairy tale.